This has some nice touches and does a good job of using context and outer presence to create the character. It's a bit let down by poor proofreading leading to spelling and punctuation errors, but the writing is quite alive. Just proofread more carefully. Please LABEL correctly.
This has some nice touches and does a good job of using context and outer presence to create the character. It's a bit let down by poor proofreading leading to spelling and punctuation errors, but the writing is quite alive. Just proofread more carefully. Please LABEL correctly.
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